Environmental problems such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days. The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution.
why is this? and how can this problem be solved?
There is no doubt that environment issues such as pollution are increasingly causing serious global problems in terms of climate change. Authorities have made efforts to solve the problems arised from rising global temperatures, however, they have achieved few solutions. This essay will first discuss the reason why this issue have not been solved yet and secondly provide a possible solution for it.
Governments are still struggling to improve the environmental problems due that there is a lack of awarness about the real issue of climate change among people. Individuals have not taken into consideration the consequences that may arise from weather changes in the near future. This is because nowadays people believe that they still live in a normal planet and they do not think about the potential results of changes in global temperatures. To illustrate this, recent research has proven that only 10% of the population is aware about the future problems becoming from global rising temperatures.
Therefore, creating more prevention campaigns is the manner to sort the negative impact that changes in temperature is making on the planet. Encouraging people to take certain measures plays an essential role to curb the planet’s harm. Hence, every single council should create climate change prevention campaigns in schools and universites. For example, authorities should promote people not to dump waste in public areas and enhance them to split the garbage into recycleable and non-recycleable items.
To conclude, although governments often strive to prevent environmental changes, they should make more campains to avoid catastrophes. In addition, this is useless without a synergic actions between authorities and the awarness of indiviuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 81, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...strive to prevent environmental changes, they should make more campains to avoid ...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'action'?
Suggestion: action
...ion, this is useless without a synergic actions between authorities and the awarness of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56133828996 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90568902385 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7271950771 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296654782656 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921355415131 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070250412509 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164700345773 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119501736719 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.