Some people believe that success in life depends upon hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important.
Discuss both view and give your opinion?
Some individuals argue that being successful during life is a result of a lot of work and positive attitudes, whereas some people claim that a sought to make a profit and well being are paramount.
The achievement of goals in life are commonly related to greater amount of work and personal deteremination. However, as more work people do, there are more chances to fail, still, more chances of obtaining positive results overall. To say in other words, hardworking and positive attitude lead people to be exposed to greater opportunities and therefore are more likely to success. To illustrate this, Rafa Nadal, that is a professional tennis player who has trained extremely hard during his career, is always positive while playing matches, and thus is the best player in the world despite the fact that he has loss a match plenty of times.
On the other hand, making great profits and staying fit could be crucial to become an accomplished professional in life. Having more money allows people to be wealthy, hence they could buy anything they desire and also maintain greatly well their bodies. A prime example of this is Madonna, a famous handsome singer who seems to be successful due to the fact that she has extremely high incomes and can afford everything she wants.
In my opinion, making a proper profit is important in life to be able to feed your family and also save for leisure activities. However there is no doubt that the only way to feel accomplished in life is hardworking and facing challenges with positive mind.
To conclude, although money can help people to obtain material things and make any activity you desire, having greater incomes or being more handsome does not buy happiness. In fact, working hard and staying positive in life is the best way to be a successful person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, in fact, no doubt, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87337662338 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61936131891 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551948051948 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.0727775642 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184268373732 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074379076658 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461479669094 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106615327168 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225556931273 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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