Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
While some companies think that their employees might dress in a smart manner, others claim that the excellence in working overtake the type of clothes they carry. This essay will briefly discuss both statements, and support the idea on how an employee dress is paramount for the organization.
At these times, companies encourage to people working for them to dress in a proper manner. That is to say, that in certain enterprises, employees are bound to dress according to their type of job. To illustrate this, people working for Sony enterprise are encouraged to use formal clothes, particularly when they attend to public. I believe that the way workers dress is crucial for the prestige of an organisation, it let the company seen as a serious business. Therefore, customers may feel more comfortable and protected at the time of consuming in the company.
On the other hand, some people believe that the level of hard-working that employees provide, outweigh the type of clothing they wear. In other words, those people think that if someone is able to make a profit for the company, their appearance do not matter. Personally, I do not think as those ones, as I believe companies can improve their quality of service by searching and recruiting workers who are willing to dress properly.
To conclude, some companies encourage their employees to dress according to their job type. The appearence of employees is crucial for the benefit of the company, as the customers would see the organisation as a safe place to consume, and not only for the quality of work the employers provide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: peopling
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, may, so, therefore, while, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02621722846 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76228337236 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3865541373 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20171868108 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823434635966 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351583463616 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140405050052 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021438279767 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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