It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is considered by many people that only talented people could accomplish to become a proffessional in sport and art. Whereas others argue that any younger can learn properly to achieve as a great athlete or artist. This essay will first discuss how youngers can develop these soft skills and then explain how individual natural talent should be boosted.
There is no doubt that the inherited ability of certain individuals to play sports or having an artistic mind can lead to excellent results in their career. That is to say, that people with overwhelming aptitudes can fully develop as a professional in his field. For example, it is clear that Messi, a soccer star has a natural talent to make goals during a match, and that is the reason why he is one of the best soccer players in the world.
Turning to the other side of the view, it is argued that anyone could become an expertise if it had learn how to achieve it. To put more simply, if every educational institute provides the tools for children to succeed in certain skills such as sport or art, at the long run, students would have accomplished as experts in their field. To illustrate this, recent research has shown that 70% of the students graduated from Berkley School have become professional musicians, this is because the curriculum is based mainly on soft skills.
I personally believe that not all the professionals have a natural capacity and this could be taught and trained from the very first subject of the school.
To conclude, although natural abilities enhance the sport and art abilities of a person, the individual capacity is an skill that could be trained and mastered from the beginning of people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...one could become an expertise if it had learn how to achieve it. To put more simply, ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'learned', 'learnt'.
Suggestion: learned; learnt
...one could become an expertise if it had learn how to achieve it. To put more simply, ...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...of a person, the individual capacity is an skill that could be trained and mastere...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, whereas, for example, no doubt, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59401023464 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575342465753 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9096359237 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296474885933 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103314538334 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483713148412 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159289809883 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571553236157 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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