Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
A growing number of people are opting to lead an independent life or reside with with their friends in preference to living with their own families. This act of shifting away from family roots has been reckoned to bring adverse effects on societies. I totally agree that this trend can not always be considered as a positive development and I will explain why in this essay.
Family relations and moral values are the foundations of a reputable society. Firstly, unlike a person living autonomously, the one grown up and living in a happy family environment is less likely to experience negative feelings such as isolation, homesickness, loneliness, anxiety, depression which can affect their mental and social well-being. A second negative factor that might be resulted from independent life is loosing the sense of belonging once grown-ups start to adjust to their friends company. By this I mean that even if they are surrounded with their close ones, they often lack support, love, kindness from their families where they always have a place to feel secure, comfortable and happy that can not always achieved from others or from their own. Thirdly, people who live away from their bonds are found to commit different crimes more often than those in families and the likelihood of joining to different criminal groups, developing various bad habits, changing behaviours under the influence of friends are the common problems seen in many societies. This suggests that family setup fosters balance in people's lives, brings stability and safety to communities.
On the other hand, it is true that society needs those who live independent since this means that they know how to stand up for themselves, take up their responsibilities and support themselves and those in need. Despite this, it seems to me that family bonds are an integral part of society which facilitates its overall structure.
In conclusion, the contribution of families providing community with healthy atmosphere such as love, safety, security ,comfort is more significant than the trend that can affect its development otherwise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, so, third, thirdly, well, i mean, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36982248521 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81333568439 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4489093455 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.0 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9090909091 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27602630133 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104194972851 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719846499033 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173460363742 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926578867678 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.