Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other parts of lifes. Unfortunately, not many achieve this balace. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problem? Suggest some solutions to solve the problem?
These days, numbers of people struggle with achieving the ideal work-life balance. There has been growing evidence of the downside of work-life imbalance, and to address this matter, some feasible measures should be taken.
To begin with, this issue is often associated with undesirable consequencies. Firstly, since most employees tend to sacrifice their daily physical activities and recreational activities to finish undone work, which takes severe toll on their physical and mental health. In fact, in the long term, those people will suffer an increased level of stress and stress-related illnesses. Secondly, work-life imbalance could also give rise to problems with parenting, which could inflict bad impact on children, especially adolescents. This can be explained by the reality that the materialistic society of today has driven many parents to becoming workaholics, leading them to spending less time taking care of their children.
Some practical solutions are suggested to mitigate the problem. First, in order to strike a work-life balance, one viable solution is that people need to take what makes them relaxed and happy into consideration, then set priorities in life. For instance, when they come home from work, it is necessary that they learn to switch the office button off, which enables them to spare more time to enjoy leisure activities and recharge their battery. Second, if people are to plan a flexible schedule for their life, they can certainly time-manage more effectively. For instance, someday, they might focus more on work, while others, they might have a greater deal of time and energy to pursue their hobbies or relax with loved ones, which allows them to enjoy every meaningful part of their lives.
In conclusion, work-life imbalance has had a bad influence on numerous people, especially those workaholic these days. Nevertheless, this problem could be effectively solved, if everyone become more aware of its adverse impact on themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this workaholic' or 'those workaholics'?
Suggestion: this workaholic; those workaholics
...nfluence on numerous people, especially those workaholic these days. Nevertheless, this problem ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42903225806 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75289838747 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7746452134 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221576132029 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872622232657 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927890327822 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131977308984 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238347456389 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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