Nowadays museums have become more and more important. What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded?
The significance of museums is ever-growing and they are becoming an integral part of our culture. I believe these places have educational values and there are various ways to fund a museum.
To begin with, the principal role of museums is education. More specifically, the purpose of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually, this means that information about the exhibited items should be clearly explained, and this can be done in various ways. Some museums employ professional guides to lead their visitors through galleries, while other museums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to a detailed documentary about the exhibition. In this way, museums definitely play an important role in teaching people about various aspects such as culture, art, history, and science.
The financial support for museums can come under many forms, but I strongly opine that they should be funded by governments and self-earned income. Governing bodies can allocate their national budget to constructing new museums, renovating museums’ out-of-date facilities, collecting ancient artifacts or art masterpieces for display. By providing financial incentives to museums, a nation can preserve its cultural, historical, and even religious heritage. Moreover, galleries can earn revenues from admission fees, selling souvenirs in gift shops, bookstores, or through leasing museum halls for the organisation of other social events.
In conclusion, I believe museums hold remarkable educational functions and they should be financially supported by the governments as a way to protect a nation’s traditional values and through many activities of the museums as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67829457364 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02830278396 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643410852713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5735541615 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.083333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335488265777 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119642743566 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670177970857 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201977370359 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553683734549 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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