Nowadays people are purchasing more than they need. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience and knowledge.
As living standard of human is on its improvement today, people have a tendency to purchase more than their demand to satisfy their own family life as well as personal need. From my point of view, they should take control of what to buy because overshopping poses some adverse trends that worth being considered.
First and foremost, consumers will fail to manage their money and become uneconomical if they buys unnecessary things. For example, when a woman go shopping with a view to buying nutrient food for their family meal, they have prepared the amount of cash that is adequate for their purchase. However, she is lured by a beautiful dress, which forces her to spend most of the money she has to stand a chance of owning the nice one without any hesitation. As a result, she will be lack of cash to buy food she was about to get before.
Secondly, the more interested people are in one thing, the more desirable they will be to make it become their own object. Consequently, they will be immersed in finding a way to have it, which may triggers their thought of committing a crime. Regardless of knowing what they do is immoral, they can steal money, bags or even hack credit card's pin number's of others. This affects people's personality and leads to social issues, especially in our modern life.
Last but not least, if a family member doesn't join his hands in putting aside, there will emerge conflicts which may cause domestic violence. many couples who have difficulty in saving money and compromising to manage property tend to get divorced, which poses a terrible obsession on children.
In conclusion, purchasing unnecessary things causes many negative trends.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: buy
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Suggestion: Many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55434754057 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649305555556 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4655818353 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.076923077 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121205941493 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045125257072 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427179946543 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731386436677 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539658619205 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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