People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society? How can we create an ideal society?
As our civilization is on its upsurge, many people have the tendency to lead the society to become such an ideal aspect for a better living standard, but they try in vain many times when making this prospect happen. The following essay will elaborate what an ideal society is and come up with the way to create a livable community.
To begin, almost everyone tend to desire for an ideal society because living a good community helps them become more compassionate and considerate. To illustrate my point, I will give a prime example which turns up in my neighborhood. The area where I live is regarded as an ideal place to live because of its good security and lifestyle of residents. They are always willing to stand by one another as follows supporting both physical and mental health such as fundraising to help the poor or lending an ear to give sound advice when some of whom are in trouble. These activities not only boost the relationship among people but also better their behavior with others. Moreover, an ideal society is considered as a peaceful space without crime, terror and war. It is apparent that these factors result in many serious problems such as famine, extreme weather and even mutual murder, which makes the earth become a hell to live rather than livable planet.
How can we improve our society? In my opinion, first of all, each individual should be aware of their own responsibility to create an ideal community by fulfilling their gap of character and manner, taking part in more extracurricular activities or doing charity works. Government and authorities should also propose a course of action to guarantee the security of regions. More surveillance camera should be installed as well to avoid criminals committing a crime and conflicts among neighbors.
In conclusion. creating an ideal society is everyone's duty. It depends on how hard they try to achieve this accomplishment.
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...hey try to achieve this accomplishment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95031055901 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78539401415 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599378881988 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0667926058 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.266666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379434443889 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127629013003 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133395815691 0.0667982634062 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260936861228 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830505745097 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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