Nowadays, people buy a lot things even through they do not really need them. why is it happing in you opinion Is it a positive or negative trend for individual and society.
Thesedays ,individuals purchase many products without any reasons. It is happening owing to increase demand of masses .Which is beneficial for uplift the standard in society .However, it is the cause of garbage and wastege of money.
To embark with, there are manifold point to shore up my views. First and foremost, advertiseing is the chief reason behind this phenomena because many advertisement flash upon the television screen than masses get attractive towards the product those product are without any worries they waste surplus money on new products and do not give preference to old goods. Secondly , marketing strategy is also major cause of this obstacle because most of markets mete out a lot of discount attract people to purchase more and packaging is also play vital role because most of masses buy things to watch products package. The are the big issue behind to buy new products.
On the other hand, there are many cons to buy new products because when people spend money on new things they do not use old things and throw the outside in the house those old things contribute to increase the garbage which leads a lot problems related to human beings and animals. Moreover, people are becomeing more and more spend thrift they spend a lot on unnecessary things such as electronic gadgets ,cars and luxury things. While, buying new goods people improve their standard in society when they buy new things than they can show their personality in front of the other people or society.
To sum up , money is the precious thing for everyone with the help of one can enjoy arestocratic lifestyle .Thus, if people spend money by planing it would be fruitful in future .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4523010382 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.6279977836 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.5 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186025327768 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715564912842 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527836240306 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100721330692 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654343890792 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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