With the development of science and technology, as well as the progress of society, people have more energy and awareness to pursue life with better quality. One change illustrates this trend is that men and women allocate more time and money on their appearance than ever before.
On the one hand, people pay more attention to their lookings because of psychological demands. The highly developed technology and society bring not only the convenience to people's daily life but also renovation to people's thoughts. Not satisfying with experience with simpleness and carelessness any more, human beings start to desire more delicate patterns, including self-recognition and self-confidence. Carefully maintained appearance reflects the psychological needs of being self-proud. Accordingly, males and females tend to spend more hours and cash on their appearance to demonstrate themselves as self-disciplined individuals with competence and confidence. For example, everyone knows that candidates should keep a neat and proper looking for a job interview, which can give interviewers an excellent first impression and positive judgement on them.
On the other hand, to manage one's body and keep it fit are essential for the sake of health. Modern medical research proved already that physical health relies on self-management of human bodies. Consequently, people are willing to devote time and money to exercise and workout to keep a good shape. For instance, gyms are no longer places for professional sports training. Instead, they are crowded with ordinary people coming for daily exercise. No matter young and old, people voluntarily invest energy and capital in figure management for health purposes.
To sum up, I entirely agree that today, the public spends much more time and money on their exterior looking because of the needs of physical health and psychological recognition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... them. On the other hand, to manage ones body and keep it fit are essential for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55709342561 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07359551339 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622837370242 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.70535928 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.066666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263704643484 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848432750584 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884253046007 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179378600376 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767078750875 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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