Today, in the contemporary era, novelty is in human nature. A section of society continuously throw the old things and are fond of buying new things instead. This essay will discuss the economic benefits and drawbacks of this throwaway society in the subsequent paragraphs.
On the one hand, the throwaway society has created plethora of problems. First and foremost, people have become materialistic .To elaborate, the more products available in the market ,the more craze of buying new things in people, insist them. They do not care about old products ,environment and economy.They just fulfil their desires and throw the old things.Moreover,throwaway society is the cause of landfill sites. To explain, they are responsible for collection of waste which leads to hazard for the environment especially for the innocent creatures. For example, most of the products in the waste garbage, are non-biodegradable, which is not good for the health of the living creatures. Hence, these are the disadvantages of such society.
On the other hand,there are some economic advantages too. Firstly throwaway society encourages the manufacturing, technology and research factories. Consequently, which leads to employment opportunities. Eventually ,it also enhances the economy of the nation. In addition, purchasing new advanced tools helps the people to improve their lifestyle. Lastly, industries can trade the material in the worldwide, which promotes the globalization . So, the nation earns more income. Thus, these are the perceived advantages of such society.
To recapitulate, it can be seen that disadvantages are more clear than that of advantages. There is no provable benefits of such criteria. Therefore, disadvantages outweigh the advantages
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64772727273 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37722989109 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7768010025 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.55 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290390093933 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707491869693 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085357573172 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163413561185 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632744385088 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.6 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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