Nowadays, the rise of consumerism has become a hot topic. Do the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages?
Nowadays, consumerism has been receiving a great deal of public attention. Although
this trend is not without disadvantages, the upsides will justify these.
On the one hand, consumerism which has seen as an unstoppable rise offers a number of
manifest benefits. First, since mass production is significantly growing from this trend,
job opportunities are provided for everyone more than ever. In fact, professions, such as
office work or manual work, from factories and companies are available, helping people,
especially the poor, access to employment to increase their income. Second, by going
shopping at a frequent level, people can increase their living standards. This means that
those with regular income, whether average or high, have a desire to make their families
fully equipped or to help them satisfy their shopping needs, leading to higher levels of
happiness.
On the other hand, consumerism also has some adverse consequences. First, with a view to meeting the soaring demands of customers, manufacturers and factories have created a mass manufacturing process, which is the main culprit for overproduction. Apparently, merchandise, whether manufactured or purchased, all finally becomes waste, which results in long- term environmental degradation because it takes plastic bags or packing hundreds of years to decompose. Second, if many citizens become impulsive customers, they are susceptible to waste a lot of money on purchasing items they do not need. In fact, many customers willing to spend beyond their income to constantly buying without considering thoroughly, which leads them into debt or the mortgage of personal property.
In conclusion, despite some drawbacks, such as environmental degradation, shopping addiction, consumerism plays a vital role in upgrading life quality as well as boosting national economic well-being.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, finally, first, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73476702509 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09824653039 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695340501792 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2820072685 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0797778928178 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289366033577 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353113081235 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0225712783549 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359342760492 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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