Nowadays, some parents put pressure their children to be successful.
What are the reasons for this.
Is this a positive or negative development?
It is clear that all parents want their children to lead a better life than they did. Some parents accomplish it by giving them useful advice or directing them to the fields that their children are interested in. However, these days, most parents put peessure on their children to be successful without considering their interests. I believe that there are some reasons for that and it can have a negative impact on children since they are oblidged to choose a career against their wish.
One of the main reasons for parent's pressure is that they would like their children to lead a high standardized lifestyle by gaining success. What I mean by this is that parents might have had difficulties during their life or lived in a poor condition. As a result, they do not want their children to experience tha same predicaments as they did. Another factor might be parents' willingness to show off. All parents want to be proud of their children's achievements by telling it to others and showing how successful children they have brought up.
Parent's urge towards their children to become successful can lead them to have an undesirable life. Here I am referring to the fact that parents can encourage their children to acquire an occupation that they do nor have passion for. To illustrate, a child may want to xhoose a career with low income but can get pleasure such as an artist. However, parents disapprove the idea and encourage them to study politics or other fields that can offer them a bright future. Consequently, this situation leads them to become a person who can not express their own ideas and desires. Furthermore, providing that they opt for the area they are not interested in, they can not feel the real sense of job satisfaction even though they can be successful.
To sum up, parents should provide their children with freedom to decide on their own future.Otherwise, it can have a detrimental effect on their behaviour and feelings.
Comments
Many people claim that,…
Many people claim that, peers pressure plays a vital role on students. Especially, on their accomplishments and failures. In my point of view these actions cause more negative effect on kids rather then positive.
A number of factors can be attributed to this issue. The competition has been increased these days as compare to before, so parents wants their children to be highly updated in these environment moreover they should be multitasking. When it comes to student, if they are belong to reputed families. It's create a burden on them to perform excellent in every aspect of life. As a result, the student got in to depression. For instance in many college and universities the cut-off lists are really high in the cutthroat competition. You have to get above 90% or 95% to attain admission in your wiling college.
It should be understand by the parents, that success does not come only with getting good grade. Importantly in these days, where you have plenty of options for making good carrier. In addition to, parents should encourage their children's to focus on the things, which they wiling to do as regards to focus on the things which they do not like to accept.
To sum up, parents should be not pressurised their kids to perform better just of their show off because these things does not help student. As a consequence of that they often feel stress and uncomfortable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, i mean, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85074626866 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71344104558 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513432835821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.5484242389 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315716793355 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118527508165 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597058325438 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210400298241 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769396110049 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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