Nowadays some people feel that schoolchildren are give too much homework. In your opinion, should homework time be reduced at banned altogether?
Indubitably, homework is plays paramount significant role in student's life and it is one of the useful exercise for learners. It is argued that in these days individuals considered that childrens are under the pressure of heavy homework that given by their tutor. However, i believed that totaly prohibited it is not only a solution because it teaches student numerous skills. So, reduced the work is more effective then other notion.
Fundamentally, there are myriad of contributing factors that hold substantial benefits for learners . First of all, school work at home assist to imparting valueable skills in student such as discipline to complete their whole work. For example, had my friend, Raman not accomplished their school work at the proper time then now he would not have discipline manners.
Secondly, homework makes student independent since they complete their task by himself then they not only become independent but also get some extra knowledge. For instance when a pupil get project from school then they search about it on the internet or in liabrary which aid them to grab some extra information. Finally, beside from childrens, parents alos reap the benefits from it because when their offsprings get work then sometime they asked about it from their parents. Therefore, parents get oppourtunities to involve on their child's work that what they read or what they learn from school.
On the flip side, there is no iota of doubt that it contain fruitful consequences but too much homework negatively effect on children's mind as due to heavy study load they become bookworm and never think about their health. To vindicate, the BBC in their survey revealed that 45% of students were experienced from depression beacasue of high work pressure. Henceforth, in my opinion, i believed that the amount of work should be limited for one hour in the evening that is why they also get some time to for other curriculum activities like sports and music.
To recapitulate, it can be reitrated that, school work at home plays a crucial role in student's life and teach some valuable skills that help them untill their rest of life. So, it should not be banned altogether but reduce its amounts is too hard to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00539083558 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.648125088 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1609554636 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15368042563 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549442287019 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622758424848 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984178399541 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582508477542 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.