Nowadays there is a trend that reports of media focus on pronouns and emergencies rather than postive of development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Media play vital role in every habitant the important of journalism which always debatable has now become more controversial With many people claiming is beneficial while other reject other notion
In the running day there numerous positive development on media to focus on problem and emergencies firstly more and more developed in industries in global then the people watch information through media and majority of people growth of development rise. Secondly media focus on crime related News so that majority of people to more aware after see this news. When people are expose too much news about crime for accidents they will lose the sense of security also some reporter play the dramatic And exciting information is easy to draw readers attention
On the flipside, there are opposing voices the neck to report I consider to contribute to the Development of society People are aware of social problems such as theft of Robbery can the government and local Report is look for the best solutions to address the problems the role of journalism tell the general public what is the current news they cannot hide the fact of natural disaster or road accident which allowed them to Responsible to the audience
I staunch thatSpace the bad news because the feeling of an anexity to A large number of audiences they are avoidable as they are the main component of current information
The government and the citizens can learn from the news and try to solve the problems
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...neficial while other reject other notion In the running day there numerous positi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Secondly media focus on crime related News so that majority of people to more ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er see this news. When people are expose too much news about crime for accidents ...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider contributing'.
Suggestion: consider contributing
...re opposing voices the neck to report I consider to contribute to the Development of society People ar...
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Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...roblems the role of journalism tell the general public what is the current news they cannot hi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d news because the feeling of an anexity to A large number of audiences they are ...
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Line 6, column 72, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...s because the feeling of an anexity to A large number of audiences they are avoidable as they ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99190283401 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55837772731 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 82.0 20.2975951904 404% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 332.623243659 49.4020404114 673% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 411.0 106.682146367 385% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 82.3333333333 20.7667163134 396% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128541673791 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088457193478 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141296670011 0.0667982634062 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522927866735 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526759567811 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.2 13.0946893788 330% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.75 50.2224549098 -23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 11.3001002004 312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.85 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.54 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.8 10.1190380762 344% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.