In recent times, there is an ongoing disputation on the role of TV in everyday life, and it inevitably ignited a controversy. Even though multitudinous people hold a view that TV has considerable negative impacts compared to its positive impacts, I vehemently dissent from this view. Moreover, I strongly concur that TV plays a crucial part in our life, and it helps in providing education, information and also acts as a companion.
Firstly, watching television has been inextricably entwined with entertainment, and it leads to belief that TV is only used for spending leisure time. However, TV also helps in making people aware of the current affairs and also helps is propagating news to remote areas. For example, in 2011, a group of eminent researchers conducted a longitudinal study and ascertained empirical evidence suggesting that TV is the most viewed source of news. Thus, TV has a crucial role in spreading information to people across the world.
In addition, TV acts as a companion to older age and lonely people. Since TV has programs that are targeted towards every demographic, TV can provide company for older people. Furthermore, in recent years, even homemakers are highly dependent on TV as a source of company. Hence, it is evident that television became a necessity in current generation.
In conclusion, after analyzing the embellished points, several facts can be ascertained including the facts that TV helps in spreading awareness, and helps defeat loneliness. Therefore, I firmly believe TV plays a crucial role in our everyday life, and it became an essential need.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19691119691 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04859446893 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8416536405 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227377581181 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798957542086 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416926315976 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135392836992 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216527846968 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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