Nowadays we can see definite signs of surplus production in almost every industry sector, and this is leading to environmental damage. What are some possible solutions to this situation?
Despite knowing the problems of excess production of anything, modern humans are constantly ignoring the effects of this on the nature. This essay will examine some of the main causes of surplus production and solutions to tackle the issue.
Firstly, The main cause of increasing the output from any industry is over exploitation of resources. I mean that for an industry to produce some goods they require some raw materials, which are often taken from underground leading to the changes in climatic conditions. For example, In many countries due to excessive mining of petroleum resources, ground is sinking to fill the gaps. The solution is for the governments to minimize the mining industry and to bring new laws in reducing the over production from any company.
Secondly, There are some materials which take more time to dissolve like the plastic. In other words, plastics and other poly chemicals take more than 500 years to mix with sand, In the meantime, they block the rain water entering ground resulting in road blockages. Moreover, if they are burnt, they produce harmful gases, which often cause health issues in humans and other living organisms. People should minimize using harmful plastic covers by thinking of alternatives. It is also mandatory for governments to ban their usage and to spread awareness by showing the side effects of this chemical.
Finally, overusing of the ground or sea to produce more food can result in damaging the area. What I mean by this is that excessive fishing in a particular area can affect the species as there is no time for them to reproduce. Similarly, agriculture land looses its properties if they are used many times. The way forward might be to control the over usage of any natural resource by farmers and industries. This can also be encountered by developing artificial technologies like human ponds for fishing.
To sum up, it is very clear that humans have destroyed most of the ecosystem by mining, cutting down the trees and by over using land. Both the governments and people have the responsibility to save the endangered species and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, i mean, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69785268147 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7348557274 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165704996759 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502134801828 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057620746594 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934930508344 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673651836391 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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