Nowadays young people have to make the decision about their future career. Some people, however, believe that teachers and parents can make a better choice for their future career.
Discuss both options and include your opinion.
What these days are crucial is that people at the transition period must choose their future occupations. In one hand some believe that parents and adults are the most efficient guide to leading be a prosperous person, however, others indicate that young people who are well-informed about themselves are the finest. I maintain that both ideas have their positive and negative aspects which will be addressed in this essay.
Whether teachers, parents or any kind of people who have a role in nurturing and upbringing are the determining people to make a decision about the students and children jobs or not is a controversial argument. Firstly, proponents claim that students and pupils do not know how to deal with difficulties in future and how to tackle them. Secondly, regarding cost of living, experts indicate that all students must select lucrative jobs and it is impossible to convince without teachers and parents choices. Although, in some cases, facts and figures show that the chosen carrier could be deficient if they select it based on their sentimental and emotional values.
On the other hand, some sociologists come up with this reason that it should be better for children to be responsible for their future jobs. Firstly, the most important point in future life is motivation, they said. If students distinguish and recognize what kind of opportunities is suitable for them, they will try harder to achieve their goal. Secondly, all the jobs traverse the universities, so students when enter colleges and select field of studies, they choose the future job spontaneously. But the opponents say that according to science and technology courses, most of the students are going to train majors which are overwhelmed by older students and society needs diverse carriers.
In conclusion, it is true that future jobs can be vital for students’ lives. But, what is crucial in choosing an occupation for students is that with regard to proven evidence a good job will emerge through consulting among students and their caregivers such as parents and teachers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in some cases, it is true, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15680473373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77936653405 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.803482463 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24120921734 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830918219793 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475075292697 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152378027491 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394271611857 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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