Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? What can be done to improve this situation?
Culture Globalization affects generations,so many youngsters are having least knowledge about their culture and tradition. The major measure to tackle this situation is awareness about it. This essay will discuss all the reasons and measure in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, interacting and integrating with people from western societies is a main cause of overcome a grasp in many cultures. The culture globalization refers to the transmission of ideas, relations and values around the world in such a way as to extend and intensify social relations. This process marked by consumption of internet and international travel. In India, for example, in urban areas of Punjab, it is rare to find a child speaking in the mother tongue with his family or friends. The only place the youngsters seek out the Punjabi language is the dance floor. This this process cause a serious cause among ancient cultures.
On the Other hand, there are plenty of measures can be do for making awareness about generations. Firstly, awareness camps among societies plays a vital role aware young peoples.if our seniors citizens can organize some competition about cultures and traditions as a outcome of this, their off-springs and mid-age group of people may learn about their personal old relations. Secondly, youngster have to give more importance to their own culture, spent more time with seniors and avoid using moderns devices can going to be a effective approaches to be aware to our culture.
To sum up, proliferation of western culture and interaction among peoples is a main cause of that affect cultures although, tradition competitiveness and integrate to old-age people surely help to make more realization of cultures to adolescent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31884057971 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92730304711 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4655292215 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226769229639 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748784436426 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482694934623 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135117873081 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400143776463 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.