Many people believe that counties should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In present time, many countries experienced a shortage of food. A group of people opine that, economies should need to produce more food for their people and exporting it to others nation should be Prohibited. I do completely agree with this statement, all the reasons are discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, many countries are failed to proved a basic need of food to their people as they are exporting to others nation in expensive prices for a more income. Due to This tendency, many poor people are sleeping hungry as they do not have enough money to fulfill their need. Consequently, many people may caused to deceases and death occur .For example, in South Africa, the lowest amount of food supply cause to their people and they are not having any option to produce more food because of dry weather. So, They infected to physical illness and as an outcome of this, they died and the driest environment is making bad condition that are not good to living there.
In addition, if many fruits are not consumed after brings from trees. Then, they are reducing their freshness and taste withing the time, so it is necessary to use food immediately because fresh food have a more nutrition and benefited for our body. Furthermore, better utilization can also helps to provide fresh food for people in lower amount, so they can easily afford food for their family. To cite an example,In USA, many food companies, are processed foods into products. Thus, it becomes more long lasting and sustainable so, it is necessary to consumption of food after harvest from trees.
To sum up,food is a necessary thing for people, equally granted to them and better care after harvesting can lead to complete the shortage of it because export it to other nations become more expensive in their country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58978762831 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7695768679 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264962349452 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101149213113 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608383383931 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168500106793 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693612859087 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.