Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although nuclear energy creates inexpensive and renewable energy, world peace has been shadowed by the danger of nuclear weapons. I do not think that the benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the negative outcomes since it has negative effects on the environment and risks international peace used as weapons by some countries.
To create nuclear energy, natural resources, which are the main elements of all the living organisms needed to use. Building the power plants by interrupting forests where tons of animals are leaving cause a disruption of the natural habitation of some living organisms. For instance, logging the forests and leaving the toxic waste into the clean waters are causing serious problems to habitations in this very specific areas. Therefore, this disruption of nature affecting the natural circulation of life as a whole.
Additionally, nuclear power has significant negative outcomes as it can use the create nuclear weapons. Due to representing radioactive threats for humanity, there is an international community where the use of nuclear power is examined. However, some nations do not follow the globally accepted usage of nuclear energy protocols. For example, Iran and North Korea are the significant examples of this pressing problem by creating nuclear weapons to retaliate the other countries to whom they got a conflict.
To conclude, although nuclear power is a clean and easily accessible energy type, I believe the negative effects outweigh the benefits. This is because nuclear power not only threatens the environment but also humanity since it's used as a weapon by some nationalities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ificant negative outcomes as it can use the create nuclear weapons. Due to representing ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39920948617 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85187110037 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549407114625 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1103026817 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265482964465 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106484033648 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685250702287 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176458781487 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690465111874 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.