Nursing Homes.Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

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Nursing Homes.

Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

Some families nowadays no longer look after their old-aged member such as grandmother and grandfather, those prefer to in trust them into a folk’s home. This essay would discuss about the plus and minus of this action. One of the minus implications of sending elderly to nursing institution is phycological effect to the elderly and plus aspect is give family member more time to focus on their works. Reverse, I would say that take in care of the people who are being over the hill is become family’s duties.

In the one hand, Whole of elderly’s life has been given for their kids and families such us live, love, care and wealth, and become isolated people from the lovely community that they grow in is hurt. If this happening to the old-aged people would be resulted in to the deepest sense of them such as phycology matter; being quite, moodiness. As per my experience, in 2010 I have conducted the research in Mental Hospital in West Java; the data collected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to the nursing home. However, taking care by their families at home is more effective solution than send them to the care home.

On the other hand, sending the oldest family member to folk’s home provides the other member accept more time to focus on their career and kids because they have no time to nurse their elderly such as providing their meal and changing clothes. In a brief example, the survey conducted by Young Care Organization (YCO) in 2012, from 750 young couple asked 83% said that they have a lot time for themselves and more focus on their dreams. However, I would say that people would give their best for the oldest because they have give their life for their kids.

To sum up, even though sending the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial to the families, beside that was hurt their heart and linked to phycological matters.

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...research in Mental Hospital in West Java; the data collected revealed t...
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...h in Mental Hospital in West Java; the data collected revealed that 48%...
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... Mental Hospital in West Java; the data collected revealed that 48% of ...
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...al Hospital in West Java; the data collected revealed that 48% of who ...
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...l in West Java; the data collected revealed that 48% of who aged above...
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...t Java; the data collected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 year...
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...the data collected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old st...
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... data collected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stress...
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... collected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed c...
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...ected revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused ...
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...revealed that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused by lo...
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...aled that 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused by loneli...
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...hat 48% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; ...
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...8% of who aged above 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% d...
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...o aged above 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% despondent ...
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... above 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% despondent who ar...
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...ve 65 years old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% despondent who are s...
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... old stressed caused by loneliness; 36% despondent who are sent by thei...
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... caused by loneliness; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to ...
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...ed by loneliness; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to the ...
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...y loneliness; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to the nurs...
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...eliness; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to the nursing h...
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...ess; 36% despondent who are sent by their families to the nursing home....
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...6% despondent who are sent by their families to the nursing home. Howev...
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...ent who are sent by their families to the nursing home. However, taking...
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... who are sent by their families to the nursing home. However, taking ca...
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... are sent by their families to the nursing home. However, taking care b...
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...t by their families to the nursing home. However, taking care by their ...
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...to the nursing home. However, taking care by their families at home is ...
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...e nursing home. However, taking care by their families at home is more ...
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...ursing home. However, taking care by their families at home is more eff...
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... home. However, taking care by their families at home is more effective ...
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...wever, taking care by their families at home is more effective solution ...
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...r, taking care by their families at home is more effective solution tha...
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...ing care by their families at home is more effective solution than sen...
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... care by their families at home is more effective solution than send t...
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... by their families at home is more effective solution than send them to...
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... families at home is more effective solution than send them to the care ...
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... at home is more effective solution than send them to the care home. ...
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...ome is more effective solution than send them to the care home. On t...
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...s more effective solution than send them to the care home. On the ot...
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...ctive solution than send them to the care home. On the other hand, s...
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... solution than send them to the care home. On the other hand, sending...
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...n send them to the care home. On the other hand, sending the oldest ...
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...nd them to the care home. On the other hand, sending the oldest fami...
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...m to the care home. On the other hand, sending the oldest family mem...
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...e care home. On the other hand, sending the oldest family member to...
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...home. On the other hand, sending the oldest family member to folk&ap...
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... On the other hand, sending the oldest family member to folk's ...
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... the other hand, sending the oldest family member to folk's home p...
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...her hand, sending the oldest family member to folk's home provides ...
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...d, sending the oldest family member to folk's home provides the oth...
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...sending the oldest family member to folk's home provides the other ...
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... oldest family member to folk's home provides the other member accep...
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...t family member to folk's home provides the other member accept mor...
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...ber to folk's home provides the other member accept more time to f...
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... folk's home provides the other member accept more time to focus o...
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...pos;s home provides the other member accept more time to focus on their...
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...ome provides the other member accept more time to focus on their career...
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...rovides the other member accept more time to focus on their career and ...
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...s the other member accept more time to focus on their career and kids ...
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...e other member accept more time to focus on their career and kids bec...
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...r member accept more time to focus on their career and kids because th...
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...ember accept more time to focus on their career and kids because they ...
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...accept more time to focus on their career and kids because they have n...
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...more time to focus on their career and kids because they have no time ...
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... time to focus on their career and kids because they have no time to ...
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... to focus on their career and kids because they have no time to nurse ...
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... their career and kids because they have no time to nurse their elderl...
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...r career and kids because they have no time to nurse their elderly suc...
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...areer and kids because they have no time to nurse their elderly such a...
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... and kids because they have no time to nurse their elderly such as pro...
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... kids because they have no time to nurse their elderly such as providi...
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... because they have no time to nurse their elderly such as providing the...
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...e they have no time to nurse their elderly such as providing their mea...
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...ave no time to nurse their elderly such as providing their meal and ch...
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...o time to nurse their elderly such as providing their meal and changing...
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...ime to nurse their elderly such as providing their meal and changing cl...
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...rse their elderly such as providing their meal and changing clothes. In ...
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...eir elderly such as providing their meal and changing clothes. In a bri...
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...as providing their meal and changing clothes. In a brief example, the s...
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... their meal and changing clothes. In a brief example, the survey conduct...
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... brief example, the survey conducted by Young Care Organization YCO in 2...
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...ef example, the survey conducted by Young Care Organization YCO in 2012,...
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...mple, the survey conducted by Young Care Organization YCO in 2012, from ...
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... conducted by Young Care Organization YCO in 2012, from 750 young couple...
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...Young Care Organization YCO in 2012, from 750 young couple asked 83% sa...
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... Care Organization YCO in 2012, from 750 young couple asked 83% said th...
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... Organization YCO in 2012, from 750 young couple asked 83% said that t...
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... 2012, from 750 young couple asked 83% said that they have a lot time...
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...ouple asked 83% said that they have a lot time for themselves and more...
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...they have a lot time for themselves and more focus on their dreams. Ho...
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... To sum up, even though sending the old-people to the nursing home ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...To sum up, even though sending the old-people to the nursing home give...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... even though sending the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...en though sending the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial to...
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...hough sending the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial to the...
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...nding the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial to the familie...
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... the old-people to the nursing home gives beneficial to the families, be...
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...to the nursing home gives beneficial to the families, beside that was h...
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...the nursing home gives beneficial to the families, beside that was hurt ...
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...nursing home gives beneficial to the families, beside that was hurt thei...
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...me gives beneficial to the families, beside that was hurt their heart a...
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...s beneficial to the families, beside that was hurt their heart and link...
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...ficial to the families, beside that was hurt their heart and linked to...
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...l to the families, beside that was hurt their heart and linked to phyc...
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... the families, beside that was hurt their heart and linked to phycologic...
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...amilies, beside that was hurt their heart and linked to phycological mat...
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..., beside that was hurt their heart and linked to phycological matters.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...side that was hurt their heart and linked to phycological matters.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...at was hurt their heart and linked to phycological matters.
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...eir heart and linked to phycological matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75510204082 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4465905326 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.5989228496 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 291.0 5.01903807615 5798% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272864584659 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108178838588 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532255692648 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182559826702 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358230496775 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.