obesity and solution

Essay topics:

obesity and solution

obesity is one of the major health issues which most of the us facing today and the credit goes to the sedentary life style and fast food .This essay discuss why obesity occur and ways to get rid of it .

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
obesity is one of the major health issues which...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o the sedentary life style and fast food .This essay discuss why obesity occur and...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...the sedentary life style and fast food .This essay discuss why obesity occur and way...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... obesity occur and ways to get rid of it .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 41.998997996 12% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 167.0 1615.20841683 10% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 40.0 315.596192385 13% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.175 5.12529762239 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.51486685937 4.20363070211 60% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 1.75981990318 2.80592935109 63% => OK
Unique words: 32.0 176.041082164 18% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.8 0.561755894193 142% => OK
syllable_count: 54.0 506.74238477 11% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 167.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161713780663 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161713780663 0.084324248473 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161713780663 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.5 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 8.0 78.4519038076 10% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 23.5 9.78957915832 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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