Plastic shopping bag contributes to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think that they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
Non-bio-degradable plastic is a menace to the environment and ecosystem. Few people are in the opinion that this material should be banned completely because of the negative impact of it on nature. This essay is in complete agreement to the notion.
To begin with, the plastic became more popular and its demand is increasing drastically due to the durability and affordability of the material. As people are less concerned about the environment protection they discard it everywhere, this indeed affects the sustainability of the ecosystem and burning plastic escalate the air pollution level to a great extent. For example, a recent survey clearly says that 56% of earth pollution is due to improper handling. Moreover, Dumping of plastic in the sea disturbed the harmony of sea life as well. Many sea animals die every day due to consumption of the non-digestible product of mankind.
To embark on, The material has made a tremendous effect on earth, to avoid this predicament in the future we should take proactive steps. Implementing stringent action can help to some extent. Furthermore, Awareness campaigns must be launched to make people knowledgable regarding the side effect of plastic overuse. For instance, most of the people are not aware of the impact of their actions and unscientific burial, this eventually is the root cause of the problem. If the government provide proper awareness it will help to lessen the level of pollution.
To conclude, after analysing the facts given above, it can be stated that, Plastic ban will help to reduce pollution to a greater extent and it should be done with no time to protect our nature for posterity.
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- test 61
- Today, in many countries, there is insufficient respect for old people. What are the reasons? What problem it might cause? How this socio-economic problem can be solved? 61
- Plastic shopping bag contributes to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think that they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reement to the notion. To begin with, the plastic became more popular and its ...
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Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ually is the root cause of the problem. If the government provide proper awareness...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, for example, for instance, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12087912088 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98097839726 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4995361759 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198923712766 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597803199371 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435172808752 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113553134459 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219507515616 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.