Old generations often hold some traditional ideas on the correct way of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young people to prepare for modern life. What’s your opinion?
In the modern life, there is a large gap generation between oldsters and youngsters. Several people believe that old people have the right manners and behavior in the life while others argue that these ideas are behind the times and not suitable for young people to use both in a fast-paced world. This essay will discuss both views.
To begin with, it is undeniable that there are various things we can learn from old generations. First and foremost, old people have gone a lot of thick and thin so they have some valuable experiences in the real life. As a result, they will give young generations precious advice to have right method of life, thinking and behavior. In addition, there are a variety of traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern life. For instance, older generations attach great important to working hard, do one’s best and these behavior can be benefit for youngsters when they enter today’s competitive job market.
On the other hand, with the globalization, some methods of ancestor are out- of- date, people need to invent new development which keep abreast of current life. Firstly, conventional values can restrict teenagers from think globally. For example, forefathers only traded in a certain area without communicating with different countries, this is not suitable in nowadays. To integrate over the world, young people need to spend time learning foreign languages and absorbing a world of knowledge. Likewise, as people get older, they often become set is their ways to reluctant to try new things. For example, a huge number of oldsters consider that using smartphone and internet is useless and deny the magnitude of advanced technology in the modern life.
In conclusion, although there are some ideas of old generations which are useful, I strongly believe that it is essential for young people to make some appropriate changes with the current life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this behavior' or 'these behaviors'?
Suggestion: this behavior; these behaviors
...to working hard, do one's best and these behavior can be benefit for youngsters when they...
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Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...fferent countries, this is not suitable in nowadays. To integrate over the world, young peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, likewise, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13968253968 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70985436096 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4819263861 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.933333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430566482468 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121844499299 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872849609214 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275623961553 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043291387756 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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