The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Over the past decades, the gap between the elder group and the youth has never failed to draw public attention and provoke debates. Although the conservative lifestyles and behavior were favorited by that elder group, the issue as to whether affecting to develop of youth remains controversial. From my own perspective, I partially disagree with this statement.
First off, the elderly have more needed experiences due to the undergone various difficulties and the issues. Some may argue that these experiences made from more and more mature that can give useful advises when was asked. This argument could be true to some extent. If they stuck in some troubles they usually can consult the opinion from their parents or the other elderly but this is not mean they adherent or agree with them is the best way you can do.
Secondly, it is obvious that older generations have some ideas which are less useful and appropriate with the young group to adopt their lifestyles. Recent years, many people always expect to give birth to a boy who can maintain the same breed. Whilst there is an insight about the gender because the difference in behavior and the bias of society are abandoned. Additionally, more and more people believed that woman must be a housekeeper who takes care of children and do the housework. This is one of the mean reason why just only the man can become a breadwinner and pursue their career. However, they should take account of the fact that there is a number of women are the gifted leader in many domains. This example indicates that women should have the right equal with the men to go to work and catch up with their future.
In conclusion, I believe that conventional values should not be neglect as it can assist in making the younger generation the productive members of competitive society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...avorited by that elder group, the issue as to whether affecting to develop of youth remains c...
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Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...s difficulties and the issues. Some may argue that these experiences made from more a...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ductive members of competitive society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83706070288 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5453576073 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603833865815 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2830845191 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.933333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157225578399 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464685909601 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435610443275 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857589323613 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552558943426 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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