One of the biggest problems facing the world today is growing enough food to feed the ever-expanding population. Genetically Modified foods are the best way to solve this issue. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this 21st century, the pivotal roll has been played by the spots, which are include all forms of competitive physical activities many individuals take a part in sport, when they are children. However, when they are becoming adults, they stop participation in sport. In this essay I will discuss the reasons of many adults, who stop doing physical recreations and the preventive solutions for this issue.
On one hand, there are multitude of sport games : football; volleyball; cricket and many more, which are considered as the physical ativities, although, mankind play sport until childhood and do not take a part when their enter in adulthood. There are plethora of causes behind this problem. In childhood, human beings do not have any kind of social responsibility but when they become a mature, due to job; family responsibilities and social life they are not incure the time for sport games. Another reason is lack of support from parents to their offspring. For an instance, owing to the poor mentality of parents, thay think that, there is a no career in sports field, accordingly, they encourage their kids to focus on academics, which diverts the interest of youngsters from sport, which has physical recreations.
On the other hand, there are many preventive solutions to deal with the issue of adults, who are not able to incure the time for playing sports. Academic institutes should add the subject of sport, which assists to to develop the interest of teenagers in spot and make a career as a sport person and athlete. Government ought to encourage people by tagging banners, introducing advertise on television. Also company is best humans are working, are responsible. For an example, one of the european countries - Germany, where it is sine-qua-non for all organisations to allocate some days for sport event, in which all the employees can participate because it keeps safe from stress and burden of work, not only that but also keep body healthy.
To conclude, on account of less encouragement and support to adults, they stop playing sports, which contain physical exercise, although, as long as companies and schools have to organise sport events and authors ought to encourage people about sports by advertising upon television and holdings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'included'.
Suggestion: included
...has been played by the spots, which are include all forms of competitive physical activ...
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Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... to the poor mentality of parents, thay think that, there is a no career in sports fi...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...add the subject of sport, which assists to to develop the interest of teenagers in sp...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s, introducing advertise on television. Also company is best humans are working, are...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...g advertise on television. Also company is best humans are working, are responsible. Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12096774194 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78440344973 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55376344086 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1285272383 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.071428571 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0454150979481 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0226974399075 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284043489947 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0286000267648 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178403054483 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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