One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age, thanks to the development of the cutting-edge technology, humans were and are exploring numerous medical care not only to protect people life but also increasing their age and thus a rise life expectancy. I, personally, believe it is truly crucial for life that the benefits of this outlook eclipse further more than these drawbacks.
Admittedly, investigating for finding new treatment to improved medical care and help humans are living so far longer is detrimental in terms of money, time and human resources. First, the creating a treatment which can make human life longer need the amount of time from finding to researching and applying in human bodies. Besides, the money which people use for healthcare is huge because of almost all human want to have a good health. Furthermore, the old population in the world is becoming higher if the lifecycle is increasing giving the rise to the lower of the employment. In addition, the density of population is more likely to leaping in the future. However, this disadvantages can change and overshadow by the lucrative merits of improving medical care.
By contract, owing to the novel medical treatment humans are able to live longer and increase the life expectancy, which do a favour for the thriving growth of human beings. To begin with, should patients are facing to a tough disease and they do not treat, they will lose their lives. Nevertheless, if having good treatment, patients can cure and even have a long- standing life which is beneficial not only for themselves but also for social inasmuch as they can work and devote their time for make the live better. Additionally, lifecycle increase it means that the life of inhabitants is improving in comparation with the last millennium.
To sum up, with the development of technology so humans can create sensible qualities not only for healthcare but also in a myriad of aspects to make life better.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, thus, in addition, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97839506173 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78682169711 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521604938272 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6005265698 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.076923077 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235358394862 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885835132164 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695351531395 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143155077156 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542428002981 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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