One of the most pressing problems facing the world today is overpopulation. What policies do you believe governments should adopt to address the causes and effects of this problem?
It is true that population explosion has become a prominent twentieth century problem which the world is encountering. Therefore, it is necessary for governments to examine the causes and effects of this alarming trend before looking at solutions.
There are several causes leading to overpopulation and a lack of family planning could be considered the leading cause of this issue. A large number of people who face poverty, especially in poor and developing countries have little or no knowledge about family planning. As a result, they give as many children as they want, which increases the chances of producing more kids. Another cause relates to a lack of sex education. If couples who engage in sex have insufficient knowledge of contraception use, the chance of the female partners’ being pregnant might be relatively high which lead to more kids born in the future.
Population explosion leave a wide range of adverse impacts on the society as a whole. The biggest issue is that there will obviously be the shortage of the amount of resource needed to keep so many people alive. As when the population grows, it creates greater demands of providing food, water and fossil fuels. Therefore, only people who afford these things can survive. Moreover, overcrowding also leads to a decrease in quality of life due to the increase in traffic congestion and the decrease in living space.
However, there are some policies that government could take to tackle this problem. Firstly, governments need to legislate official family planning policy, regulating a maximum of two children per family along with raising awareness among people about this policy and letting them know about serious effects of overpopulation. Secondly, authorities should offer better sex education which will help people understand more about the potential consequences of having sex and one of the best way is to let them know about various safe sex techniques and contraceptive methods available to avoid any unwanted pregnancy.
In conclusion, in order to alleviate this problem, the government should legislate new laws about family planning and provide people with better sex education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30547550432 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85160503726 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593659942363 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.689462988 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165606393763 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054646118617 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642588017332 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102126355208 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654413594073 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.