Online currencies have become more common in recent years.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Online transactions have become a focal point of any business today to profit globally. In my opinion, anything with new opportunities can bring about machinations.
The internet is changing our lives from education to economics at an alarming rate and of course online currencies have opened new chances for people to make a living. Thanks to online shopping, many people do not need to walk into large bazaars to look for their needs and instead it is done with a few clicks where online money takes place. Therefore, cryptocurrency has made people’s, both consumers and producers, easier. Teachers, on the other hand, have started online lessons to spread quality knowledge globally. For example, Udemy is a platform from which a number of students learn complex subjects online for a lifetime once payment is done online. They will have an access to online materials by which they can improve their living standards, not to mention teachers themselves who are making millions of dollars through this website.
However, I feel that abovementioned examples cannot always be the same because of privacy terms. When a user enters his personal data, the website that he is using is capable of saving it for a long run. If that person entering his private information falsely goes into websites which are made under hackers, he is likely to get into the trap and lose all of his money in his bank account. Moreover, there are some individuals who try to get credit card numbers of people through fake websites advertising impossible-to-buy-drugs or announcements that cannot be real even if the logic works. That being said, there appears a doubt on online commercial activities due to privacy reasons.
In conclusion, making transactions online can be beneficial but, at the same time, we should not forget the second side of the coin.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 593, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to complex'
Suggestion: to complex
...m from which a number of students learn complex subjects online for a lifetime once pay...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
... payment is done online. They will have an access to online materials by which they can i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, i feel, in conclusion, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07894736842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87094740267 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648026315789 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9118698198 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124175006927 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403523202243 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441728269448 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676265036028 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493641544518 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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