The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments
on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is reasonable to declare that more appropriate penalties should be implemented to minimize serious accidents in order to protect both drivers and other facilities. However, there is an argument that the authority maintain their rights to issue other lesser serious restrictions to warning and caution drivers from disobeying consistently national regulations.
The world has been witnessing the remarkable raise of death tolls and injuries caused by accidents, additionally, the relevant data is recorded by every country in a single day, especially in holidays and weekends. there is a variety of reasons leading to accidents such as: drunk, doze off, absent-minded in driving or even in some situations, the driver tried to speed up and move to the wrong lanes for being faster or showing off themselves. In consequences, police officers have an obligation to seize driver license, deliver the fine, prohibit to use cars and worse, put the offenders to the jail. Depend on various cultures and different governments, each country also has their own disciplines which are considered extremely serious. For example, the penalties can be given as prohibit driving for a certain period, serve in the social centers, or be sentenced as a prisoner.
Nevertheless, the majority of civilians reject that they do not only approve aforementioned punishments because it has been happening uncontrollably but also they ask government should take more actions to prevent injurious accidents from occurrence. The discussed solutions can be provided possibly, including install camera over the roads, detect strange behaviours in driving and stop them to keep moving immediately rather than cold penalties, especially on highway or residential areas. Pavement risk-management is related to mechanical accidents during road or obstacles from construction sites that may inevitably attack to drives somehow. authority officials should conduct regular training in regarding to the law of Labor Safety as well as monitor such construction companies that may not violate the law.
Apparently, I prefer our government should educate and keep warning driving offenders about damages to people to execute heavy penalties to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64391691395 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05208710094 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652818991098 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1651595455 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0614206679772 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020344538523 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0202098495022 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0330975260925 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287328953076 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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