THE ONLY WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC IN CITIES TODAY IS BY REDUCING THE NEED FOR PEOPLE TO TRAVEL FROM HOME FOR WORK, EDUCATION OR SHOPPING.
If is often argued that, discouraging people for travelling for work, shopping or school and college is the best way to lessen the heavy traffic of city area. I completely disagree to this opinion and this essay will discuss about other important measures that can reduce traffic in city area.
To begin with, I believe that improvement of roadways is the major factor to decrease traffic problem in any area. If the roads are narrow and congested, then this led to the heavy traffic problems which also help to increase road accidents as well. Similarly, in office and school time we can feel more traffic jam in city area than any other time. This is because road is not capable to take the pressure of increasing vehicle and transportations. For example, in developed countries we rarely hear news of traffic jam, but in under developed countries like Nepal, due to the afraid of heavy traffic, people in city area have to leave earlier for their work or education. Thus, to diminish the traffic problems, government and concern authorities should take effective step to improve roads conditions that can bear increasing numbers of private and public transportations.
On the other hand, encouraging public to use public transport and strict traffic rules can be another milestone to diminish traffic form cities. In others words, government should upgrade the quality of public vehicle so that people use it without hesitation and comfortably. Besides quality concern authorities also focus on to reduce fees of public vehicles and should impose strict traffic rules for everyone to maintain the heavy traffic. For Instance, increasing number of small private cars and bikes are creating more traffic in cities. The recent survey had revealed that, people prefer private car to public because of their bad services. Thus, encouragement on public vehicle which contains more people at once can be effective to reduce traffic.
In conclusion, in modern time people always want freedom on travelling, so government should focus on upgrade the highways and public transportation rather than reducing the need of people travelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 595, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'traffics'.
Suggestion: traffics
... like Nepal, due to the afraid of heavy traffic, people in city area have to leave earl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, similarly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21449275362 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6952719071 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515942028986 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5117985192 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.933333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269793168621 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093959726619 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874440066879 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184415015613 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832044148313 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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