Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.
Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
Overpopulation in urban areas, has become a serious problem. They have led to many consequences. This essay will discuss the reasons for this problem and put forward solutions that the government and the individuals, should take to handle these critical situations.
Quite a lot of people, prefer moving to the urban areas for the sake of own well-being. Due to this, many industries started to find an appropriate place, so that it would attract all the people coming for jobs. As, many people started to move, the population in the urban places, grew at a dramatic rate, whereas there was a huge decline in the number of trees. However, this seems to be the major reason why there is a reduction in rainfall, in the cities. The ruling body can likely introduce separate places for the residents and all those industries. As, an illustration in the United States of America, the industries have been isolated from residential places which reduces the amount of smoke, pollution, as they are affecting the trees, that has caused a reduction in the amount of rain. On the other hand, the heat of the earth also started to rise, by coining a term Global Warming.
Although, rural areas have a lot of agricultural land, even the urban cities tend to have a half of them. But to manage the increasing growth of people, all those lands have to be demolished and constructed into apartments. Each and every individual, is more likely to have own vehicle and make their area over crowded. By doing so, there is an increase in the number of vehicles on the road, as the preference of the public transport has dropped, this also raises the traffic rate. As, the traffic rate grows, this leads to congestion in the road, which also scales up the accident rates. Even after the accident takes place, there is no ambulance arriving at the right time, this is also due to this situation. As, an illustration, when my neighbour wanted to attend a reception in Nungambakkam, he got stuck in the hectic traffic, which left him in vain and out of anger he returned without attending the reception. The government can introduce the lane systems, that is being followed in the rest of the countries, there is a separate lane for each and every vehicle, including heavy vehicle to the ambulance.
In conclusion, overpopulation has created a lot of problems, ranging from the reduction of rainfall to accidents. The government should introduce many policies to overcome all this, and they should also get proper support from the individuals.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, whereas, as for, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 432.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88425925926 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72136781124 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.206742267 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927917940384 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322890313473 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406495201986 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704416747275 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353475286531 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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