Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. what do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.
it is irrefutable that it becomes arduous for parents to make work life balance in this contemporary worlds. Everyone wants to fetch this balance, but the measures taken neighter have legs nor the lengths to address the issue. This essay intends to analyse the effective causes associated with this phenomenon and suggest some remedial measures to ameliorate the situation.
There are some colossal reasons behind why people fails to get balance between family and career. First and foremost pivotal reason is the consumerism. majority of people wants to use the latest technology which makes their life easy. They become workaholic since they want to purchase all latest products for them as well as for their children. The another cause is the workload from workplace. Some times they have to performs extra duty hours merely for monetary benefits. For instance, in India it is found that more than half of parents doing over time to earn more money that leads to stress on their mind as a result they not able to give enough time for family.
It is true saying that, every problem has solutons. Some imperative steps can mitigate this problems. Firstly parents have to vivid and learn how to strike a balance between family life and work. They should not only focus on revenue but also understand the true value of family. moreover, the government ought to make strict rules and fix working hours per week so that individuals would be protected from the exploitation of employer. For example, in some Western countries some strict rules imposed by government to employer and people can get enough holidays with handsome amount of money that helps parents to maintain work life balance.
In conclusion, It can be reiterate that, by and large, there are multiple causes for the hoardings gang which makes it difficult to draw a line between job and family. However, it is the onus of the parents and government to take gigantic steps to eradicate such problems. (333 words )
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, by and large, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96987951807 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43378712815 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8840406765 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110271185596 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355246098722 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472458324194 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623794048825 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236758985343 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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