In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays, instead of going to their department to work day by day, people can choose to stay at home and work with modern devices. They believe that the change creates a great deal of benefits while others suppose that it has some drawbacks. In this essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
There are several reasons state that working from home brings some benefits. First of all, people can save them time because they do not need wait for the bus. By way of example, they can economize on time up to thirty minutes per day. Besides, commuting to their place of work is replaced by working at home which is not only save time but also avoid traffic congestion. Moreover, they can take care of them family members during they working easier, especially people who have the baby or the elderly. In addition, working at home makes people feel more comfortable and less pressure than working at offices. For instance, they can eat or drink whenever they like without being afraid of their boss. Furthermore, when they do not need to go out, the daily outgoings on travelling fee and parking fee will reduce to lead to save more money.
By contrast, some people argue that this form of work is not really effective because of a number of reasons. The first of drawbacks of working with using of computers the internet and smartphones, people are difficult to communicate with co-workers. As an illustration, they often need video call or phone call ,when they want to discuss something, which is not convenient because this partner can not answer immediately. Secondly, at office, some people concentrate on working while they get distracted at home. During they working, the baby cries or other family members need help, that can interrupt their work. Take power cut as an example, they have to stop working when their house losses of power.
In conclusion, travelling to their place of work or working at home can bring both of pros and cons. In my views, kind of working which people can stay at home make them save the time, money and feel comfortable whereas other people focus on working and easy to discuss with co- workers at office.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77718832891 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43403932141 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519893899204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3150179918 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7894736842 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322602621739 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114757874396 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08067368471 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222223802254 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156691365671 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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