Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
Several years, being a famous person is easy. When they have fame, they also have a high income without difficulty. Some people believe that is adequate salary, however, others think it is too much. In this essay, I will consider three reasons that their earning is so high.
First of all, essential workers often receive low salaries. Such as nurses and teachers have to work about eight hours per day, while some famous singer or actors not only perform a lot of hours but also earn from five to ten times as much as other. For example, basic salary of teachers about five millions VND, a show of singers may be up to one hundred millions VND.
In addition, celebrities are often born with their talent for singing or acting.They nearly have not spent years at university like doctors and engineers. When they join a competition, they win and everyone knows them, for instance The voice, Viet Nam got talent. Besides, most careers must have to learn from three to six years before they work.
On other hand, most of them wastes their money on expensive houses, cars and parties.To give an illustration, Ngoc Trinh is a beautiful model in Viet Nam, she has just over one hundred shoes, each of them costs around one thousand dollars. Furthermore, some famous persons have at least one luxury villa. Not to mention, they often hold large parties.
In conclusion, each of jobs has different features, but I think that well - known artists are received too much remuneration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.375809381 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690196078431 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8608629691 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0639539173295 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217422221459 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363694778523 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0421195785767 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301928415612 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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