In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays, as the advanced technology progressing, the way that people work is charged a lot. For example, they can remotely work from home, hold an online meet across the border and the time zone. However, besides these advantages, it also causes a certain privacy concern and the security problem with it.
First of all, the more people use the internet to assistant their work, the more convenience that we can take advantage of it. The reason why is that when the majority of the people capacity to use the internet as their tool to assistant a part of his or her work, it will increase our work efficiency by hold up a virtual conference to reduce the time of transit, and we don’t need to concern about the border and the time zone. Meanwhile, by using the internet to work, it also can preserve our environment because instead of printing the material or documents to revise, we can edit these online by using smartphones and computers. In addition,
On the other hand, it could be a crisis, as if everyone doesn’t put attention to their online security. The reason why is that since the development of the internet is progressing, people seem just look at its positive side but don’t look at the backside of the coin. For instance, nowadays why so much people their personal information can easily be found on the internet is that a large proportion of the people doesn’t notice that those risk of exposing their information. Moreover, if a hacker wants to steal people's information by the internet is very easy if people don't do many jobs to protect our privacy. Meanwhile, as internet development proceed, not only we would benefit from it, but also some bad guys. For instance, as the internet more involve in our daily life, the more risk on our personal information will be exposed to the internet. That creates an beneficial environment for those hackers and some stealers to make much fraud on us in order to steal our money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... by the internet is very easy if people dont do many jobs to protect our privacy. Me...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... exposed to the internet. That creates an beneficial environment for those hacker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74705882353 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62118729536 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9020751278 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1538461538 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314174016349 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111587598512 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867653805198 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207468407185 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739157306232 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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