In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays, as technology progresses, the way that people work is charged a lot. For example, people can work remotely work from home by completing task online and meeting virtually. and , hold an online meet across the border and the time zone. However, besides these advantages,privacy and security are the main concerns of using the internet to work.
The Internet create a beneficial work environment.
First of all, the more people use the internet to assist their work, the more convenience that we can take advantage of it. The reason why is that when the majority of the people have the capacity to use the internet as their tool to assist a part of his or her work, it will increase our work efficiency by hold up a virtual conference to reduce the time of transit, and we don’t need to concern about the border and the time zone. Meanwhile, by using the internet to work, it also can preserve our environment because instead of printing the material or documents to revise, we can edit these online by using smartphones and computers. In addition,
On the other hand, it could be a crisis, as if everyone doesn’t put attention to their online security. The reason why is that since the development of the internet is progressing, people seem to just look at its positive side but don’t look at the pitfalls. For instance, nowadays, why so many people’s personal information can be easily found on the internet? Is it because a large proportion of the people are neglectant the risks of exposing their personal information. Moreover, it is very easy for a hacker to steal people's information if people don't do to protect our privacy. Meanwhile, as the internet development proceeds, not only we would benefit from it, but also some bad guys. For instance, as the internet becomes more involved in our daily lives, the more risk on our personal information will be exposed to the internet. That creates an beneficial environment for those hackers and some stealers to make much fraud on us in order to steal our money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ting task online and meeting virtually. and , hold an online meet across the border...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...g task online and meeting virtually. and , hold an online meet across the border a...
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Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , privacy
... zone. However, besides these advantages,privacy and security are the main concerns of u...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reate a beneficial work environment. First of all, the more people use the in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... smartphones and computers. In addition, On the other hand, it could be a crisis,...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to steal peoples information if people dont do to protect our privacy. Meanwhile, a...
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Line 7, column 854, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... exposed to the internet. That creates an beneficial environment for those hacker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83714285714 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77223934678 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505714285714 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0496348422 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.8125 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351937397248 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1188828432 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869466158747 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218034860161 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754420045838 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.