Happiness is often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?
Nowadays, people have put more attention on their mental health. Happiness is one of the important factors to keep our mind stay calm as well as positive. However, it is usually describes as a thing that is very difficult to give a definition. Is it really hard to describe it? What kinds of factors determine happiness? In this essay, I will offer my opinion and given supporting examples and reasons why it is so hard to describe and what element consist of happiness?
First of all, happiness is an emotion, it cannot fully be explained in words. Generally speaking, it is a feeling that can appear everywhere. Moreover, everyone has their own, unique definition of happiness, so it is very hard to use general texts to sum up everyone’s happiness. For example, to do math questions is the happiness movement in my daily life, that is because I enjoy the process of solving different kinds of math problems. Doing math problem sets not only can improve my problem-solving ability, but also it can help me to attain my taget marks during my math exams. On the other hand, doing math questions might be a troublesome to some people. Thus, each individual has their definition of happiness, it is so hard to define.
Secondly, our performance in the school or workplace absolutely has a significant impact to determine our happiness. That is because when we receive some praise from others, our self-identity will increase, we will be more confident in the public, while obtain more happiness. For example, I notice that when people are receiving some award, they always have a big smile. It is because those awards not only record their contribution in society, it is also a recognition from the people who surround them.
To conclude, happiness does a thing that is quite hard to explain in words, the more it contains is the people’s feeling rather than just a word.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, as well as, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84782608696 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80828637399 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5860135545 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72222222222 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175367847694 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645435986551 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114413426226 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11456980215 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119469801549 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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