In the past, people wore their traditional clothes and followed their culture. These days, most people wear similar clothes and therefore look very similar to one another. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
These days, people have changed they dress up. As earlier people used to wear their regional dresses which depicted their culture. Some people believe that with westernization people have forgotten their roots as well as their traditional values which connect people with each other.
Firstly, the drastic change since passed in wearing traditional clothes has lost its essence a decade a ago. However, person can never be judged by his or her clothes. Though clothes plays a vital role to explain the reason behind your personality and culture or community you belong to but this cannot be considered to be the sole reason to not adapt the changes around you.
On the other hand if we consider clothing to be the part of our existence, one should never forget his or her roots. The identification people think they carry of their fathers or for fathers comes from the way an person dresses. Clothing also describes unity among the community and this approach is important. Therefore, the increase in change in trend of the way people dress has negatively affected small communities which have now lost their existence. For a instance "kimonos" japan's traditional dress which now have lost its traditional value these.
However, i have a partial view-point to the statement as with the change in time everything needs to be changed to be survivor of the fittest but every individual should carry the sense of responsibility to put forward the tradition to our next generations to come.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... day people have changed they dress up. As earlier people use to wear their region...
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Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hanged they dress up. As earlier people use to wear their regional dresses which de...
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Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l clothes has lost its essence a decade a ago. However person can never be judged...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...l clothes has lost its essence a decade a ago. However person can never be judged by ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es has lost its essence a decade a ago. However person can never be judged by his or he...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding changes'?
Suggestion: the surrounding changes
...ered to be the sole reason to not adapt the changes around you. On the other hand if we consider ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...thers or for fathers comes from the way an person dresses. Clothing also describes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03643724696 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.773075438 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4614202061 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243557589261 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937837246983 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608812061261 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137542111078 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874380145029 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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