In this contemporary era, the majority of people became shopping as a hobby while in the past, individuals believe that it is a household task. This is a positive development and in this essay I will highlight the valid reason to substantiate the same in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commencing with the views of disagreement that shopping is a merely household work. A predominant reason is that people take it as a work. To explicate it, they are not enjoying this tasks they merely opined that it is work to purchase household items which help in their lives. Therefore, individuals get bored from these as they did not seem it interesting.
Shifting towards views of agreement, in this modern era, people want some excitement. In other words, in this modern era, both parents are working due to which they do not have enough time to spend with their adolescents. Owing to the fact that through shopping they can spend their quality time with them as well as obtain leisure time from work.To epitome, according to the survey 70% of people make shopping as a hobby to make their mood fresh. As a consequence, more and more people get involved in this for the fun.
Further strengthening view people also get relaxation from mental problems. To explain it, nowadays due to the hectic schedule they are facing a lot of problems related to health such as depression and body ache. Spending time in hobby giving an internal happiness and satisfaction. To exemplify, it had written in the newspaper that numerous people believe that shopping is the best way to get rid of health issues. Thus, it is a good way to relieve from medications.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe this is a positive trend as nowadays people do not take it as a domestic work they take it as a fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77669902913 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77273953706 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488673139159 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2674753628 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22709878788 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745595286396 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664807936275 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148539722069 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743869164369 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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