It is opined by minority of people that it is essential for humankind to use animals for testing the new medications.While, other individuals believe that it is not important and its is also very bad. I will shed light on both the opinions of the aforementioned statement and will further delineates it with plausible reasons followed by reasonable opinion.
Commencing with those who claim that it is necessary to use animals for testing.A predominant reasons is animals and human being body structure are similar. To explicate it, if scientists test medicines on animals and if it will be successful then it is guaranteed that it will not be harmful for individuals.Due to this, scientists also save the human life without lose any humankind.To epitome, a survey was conducted by Mumbai university in 2016 has revealed that 50% of animals test were give successful results for medicines. Therefore, with the help of animal testing doctors and engineers save individuals life.
As far as I am concerned I advocate in the favor of latter statement. The reason behind this no one has a right to kill the animals for their use.In other words, it is not necessary, because everyone has a right to live their life according to his\her way. Animals are very important for human beings to overcome the diseases by eating mosquitoes which harmful for people.To exemplify, government should provide information to protect the animals and use alternatives ways to test the medication.As a result, animals aid to save the life of humans by sacrificing their lives.
To recapitulate, I strongly believe that government should find other ways to test medicines because animals also a creature of this universe and no one has right to ill them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, while, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08013937282 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01265002419 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529616724739 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.9489439038 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328368069704 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133739974692 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079878000896 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195547759904 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626172883144 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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