This is a fact that a large amount of money is being spent on endorsing products by almost all companies. There are numerous potential reasons which are contributing in this trend and impact of this trend is ever rising on the lives of the people. According to my perception it’s the phenomenon has both the positives and negatives.
On the one hand, the tendency of advertising products has considerable positive affects which I am going to discuss. Firstly, companies manufacture products with the primary purpose of earning huge profits to run the business smoothly for a long period of time. Moreover, high profitability means more sales by organization that could be possible through advertising of products. Therefore, companies advertise their goods and services for earning profits In order to pay back to the society. Secondly, if companies would endorse their inventions then people could be able to know about that. Consequently, for letting buyers know about products companies allocate money for advertising that provides useful information about products like the colour, price, working of products by demonstrating that is important for end customers. Finally, endorsements are a perfect way to reach final consumers as when people see advertisements then they buy the product. Most importantly, many people are working in this sector so advertising agencies open jobs for people.
On the other hand, I consider that advertisements do not intend to provide only benefits but these also have some detrimental effects. First of all, spending a lot of money on advertising sometimes brings loss to the companies as the advertising fails to attract final customers . In addition to this, companies have to contract with famous brand ambassador as consumers especially young ones follow their favourite actor or actress and considers them as a role model so they buy those products which are endorsed by their loving celebrities .
To conclude, although giving advertisements intend to provide several benefits yet this has some draw sides which are not less than its perks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34545454545 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93735088014 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60303030303 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0918565525 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.6 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0843318595042 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337131134567 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022422895846 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0464529025797 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177221773059 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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