People believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not pay tax to the state. To what extend do you agree or disagree
Some people believe that tax is not necessary to pay and everyone would have more money savings. It seems that taxes come along with some benefits and not it saves for individual person.
To begin with, the taxes are used to develop its nations. The government has allocated some money to develop many public facilities. As the example, taxes are used to build some upgraded-infrastructures to expand their facilities. For instance, in Jakarta, besides having commuter line and bus way, government choose to have mass rapid transportation (mrt) to split people density in the exists public transportations which over-crowded and it is not convenient anymore. It is used to build some new infrastructures to solve some local problems.
Furthermore, it is not only make some new facilities but also how taxes are used to keep up those facilities so it continuously used well every time. For example, this obligation money are used to hire some people to clean this kind of public transportation. Ultimately, the taxes also used to give some public health services which could escalate people health index. It would gathered public’s money to help the poverty people to have equal health facilities. as the sample, in Indonesia every people need to pay around Rp.53,000 as the health taxes. They can used the money every time they need, while it could be used by others to help the poor one.
In conclusion, it is better to spend the money we earn become taxes which used by the government wisely to elevate the public facilities and not just could be used personally.
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Suggestion: use
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99239543726 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9709957053 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513307984791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3129706168 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149940658238 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612142515408 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473572716785 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102622880239 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385439291012 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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