People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Individuals born in the current generation have a long life compared to the people in past few decades ago. The most positive aspect of this change is that the pain of losing the loved ones is reduced and children tend to spend quality time with their grandparents. The flip side is that, taxes are imposed high on working people which adds extra burden.
On the one hand, because of the advanced medical technologies human life span have increased in the recent years. One of the biggest advantage is that people need not suffer in pain because of missing their near ones. Almost every disease can be cured by the medicines. It helps the elderly to spend more time with their family and grand children also the office going people at home will have some one at home to take care of their children. Living with the grand parents help the kids to learn more and helps them solving every day problems. A recent survey by Mother Teresa university has revealed that the children who spend more time with their grand parents are less likely to get stressed.
On the other hand, because of the increased life time the cost to support the elderly have also increased. Governments should increase the tax of the office going people to afford pension to the elderly people. Hence it puts pressure on the working group. A recent survey by New york Times, states that the tax on office going group would increase to 40% in the future decades because of increased elderly population
To conclude, living a longer life is a blessing to human and it is affordable at some cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...e office going people at home will have some one at home to take care of their children....
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Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to solve' or 'solve'.
Suggestion: to solve; solve
...p the kids to learn more and helps them solving every day problems. A recent survey by ...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...he other hand, because of the increased life time the cost to support the elderly have al...
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...o afford pension to the elderly people. Hence it puts pressure on the working group. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67870036101 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25469689078 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519855595668 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8195543851 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6923076923 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856843424411 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0323968645408 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245420383702 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637148887502 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307376830709 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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