People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable that the world is developing rapidly so that people’s quality of life has improved enormously over the decades. Remarkable factors for this change are due to upmarket infrastructure, advanced medical facilities, and various prospects taken by the government to boost people’s living standards. However, some people believe, artificial intelligence (AI) results from the Industrial Revolution may even conquer people’s daily function. I strongly concur with this thought, that the quality of life has grown when compared to centuries ago, which will be discussed in the following passage.
Firstly, as several upmarket infrastructures are being introduced and implemented, people’s living is much easier and convenient. For example, public transport inevitably alleviates the problems of traffic congestion and pollution. Modern, latest, speedy public transport will help to stimulate people using them more. Meanwhile, the government should co-operate with other medical-related organizations, to construct and invent further functional medical facilities. As they upgrade the infrastructure, equipment, and services of hospitals, more people will have the chance to be treated by expertise doctors with the help of advanced technology. For instance, people all around the world are hoping that scientists and doctors would discover a final cure for COVID-19.
On the flip side, numerous people are concerned with the implementation of artificial intelligence in the Industrial Revolution and daily activities. For example, robots tend to become a powerful alternative for an assembly line instead of ordinary workers. As a result, there will be a sharp increase in the unemployment rate. Moreover, the application of AI in a robot vacuum is likely to turn people to become lazy and lack of basic skills such as doing chores at their own houses.
In conclusion, despite some downsides that the modern future may bring, it is reasonable to know that people are yearning for brighter and fulfilled upcoming days. Additionally, we are about to be beneficial from top-notch infrastructure, higher-level medical aid together with properly avail the usefulness of AI.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70153846154 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.204975422 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612307692308 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0332482992 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8125 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13120806215 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411768399237 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376150330926 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763054741264 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568769063811 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.