Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The appearance of advertising has gained the popularity of public attention as it is everywhere around us. Some people believe promoting is useful when looking for a particular product, whereas some others claim advertising unintentionally influences our private lives. Although I concur with some possible drawbacks that advertising brings, but I incline that the advantages would outweigh the downsides.
It is certainly true that advertising has gradually taken place in our daily activities and environment. We can see its presence when reading an online article, watching television, and on all platforms of social media. Besides, advertising plays a vital role when we are searching for a specific product. With the help of Search Engine Optimization, the abundance of choices is available to potential customers at the fastest rate. Hence, customers are free to choose the merchandise they want despite wherever they are and whenever they like. Accordingly, it is undeniable that along with technological advancement, advertising has been made accessible and easier for customers, such as big e-commerce websites like Amazon, eBay, Alibaba, etc.
On the other hand, promoting inevitably leads to some unexpected outcomes in addition to its usefulness. In 2018, due to a famous data scandal, pointing to Mark Zuckerberg, it has revealed that millions of Facebook users' data were leaked for political purposes. It has proved that even a powerful company like Facebook had a big gap in assuring users’ private information. Moreover, regardless of the assistance that Search Engine Optimization may provide, it may probably display some unreliable and biased websites to consumers. It is based on the fact that some websites’ owners willingly pay more money to be listed on higher ranking in search result listings.
In conclusion, I consider that advertising has both sides, especially as they seem dangerous to people’s confidentiality. However, by no means, our daily lives will be a lack of the presence and influence of advertising and all kinds of social media, therefore their benefits will overshadow their negative impacts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ebsites like Amazon, eBay, Alibaba, etc. On the other hand, promoting inevitably ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50606060606 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09857783072 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8113948727 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5625 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187110482905 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576189886683 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495822426072 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118174351531 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656576696989 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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