Some people think that mental strength is the most important factor for success in sports. However, some others believe that it is more important to have strong and fit people. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
It is an undeniable trend that sports have gained popularity in the society for many years. Many people claim a major contributor to one’s success in sports is a stable mental strength whereas others suppose by no means to succeed without a robust and well-built shape. In my opinion, both views are reasonable so that I will elaborate in this essay.
First of all, in order for athletes to compete, intense exercising such as building muscles is a great way to keep fit and stay healthy. By taking constant training and provision, athletes can always be well-prepared for any upcoming competitions and important sport events. As a result, athletes tend to be more confident and well perform thanks to the help of their flexible bodies. Sports also require an absolutely lively and suitable person with great endurance, speed and agility to accomplish an activity in any sports field.
On the other hand, rather than focusing on muscles, many athletes need to take into account the importance of their mental health. It is known that two heads are better than one, so that athletes are impossible to surpass other competitors and achieve the first place without a precise tactic at the right time. In order to develop one’s competitive advantage effectively, people inevitably obey a training program rigorously and incessantly. For that reason, their perceptions may lead to a strong drive for success while competing. For instance, many parasports are now introduced to stimulate many physically disabled athletes to compete, in which they have proved that people are possible to overcome any adverse circumstances in sports as well as in life.
In conclusion, I do consider sports achievements cannot be attained completely without the missing of either a physical fitness or a strong mental health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16326530612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80945792283 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608843537415 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5632966001 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232559377989 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767788838584 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365312540294 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136965723608 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046399043007 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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