People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?
people usually feel that adaption to new situations it their lives is difficult. While I agree with this statement, but there is always some solutions to overcome with these feelings. In my opinion specify a goal for every situation could be an important key to adapt new situations.
Nowadays, people are always face with new situations which could be in their work place or their personal lives. For example, immigration is one of the main decisions which put them in difficulties. they leave their country in order to find a good job or a suitable life. Moreover, there are lots of limitations that may put them in a worse situation to adapt with like relationships with their family or friends, sense of fear for future.
Furthermore, I believe that choose an appropriate goal could help people by make them concentrate on their manner and feel them satisfied. Accurate calculation of elements which could affect their future is another guidance for them. For instance, they should graph a road map and identify the steps exactly. By doing this, it could be possible to compare actions and results with our premediated schedule. As a result, if our brain thinks optimistic, it would encourage body to keep going and make it easier mentally.
As a consequence, although all of us may face with new situations in our lives, there are lots of mental routes to make our brain ready for difficult changes and overcome fears.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93801652893 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7082891779 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0633618262 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22580836168 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850849685588 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722134080127 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14315382392 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303887669913 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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